Friday, August 29, 2008

footsteps>across the universe...


you turned around.
a brief smile escaped your lips,
u left me on the swing,
the girl with the apple red klips.


i wouldnt let go
of your mild cherry scent
but i realized there werent
anymore "together" days,left to be spent.


the light-blue breeze
carried your unbroken voice,
which froze us in time
and left us no other choice.


i bent down to see
what had just kissed my hand,
they were promises from you,
from some faraway land.


the twinkle in your blackest eyes
entrapped me,that noon
it told me,"wait for me,
and I will see YOU soon."

11 comments:

rito said...

good work ms chatterjee!!!apnar message gulo thik ar pawa jacche na ajkal tai apni ektu bolben apnar ki hoyeche??? and its nice to see that you have an outlet for all your pent up anger because we all need that ;)

Unknown said...

bhalo likhechish!!!!...a slight deviation from ur usual style,i must say......felt nice readng it!!!
@ rito
dis poem seemed lyk an outlet of anger 2 u???

rito said...

no not only anger...we all need a medium to express emotions...whatever it may be...

wide-eyed-vagabond. said...

no offence,but umm...dis is a pure "feel-good" poem...umm....!

* bemused! said...

yup..
absolutely.
just made me smile!

very ..*ah*..fresh..n soft..
n makes u feel all nice n fuzzy inside!

the shadow of the Grim said...

bhery bhery refreshing u knoe.....lyk reading it quite a lawt!!!!!.....btw..ish dere any deeper significance in da poem>????

wide-eyed-vagabond. said...

umm...lots.

jokes apart....NONE(4 once.)

mεphîsτσphεlεs said...

Well...ahem...though I'm an intruder, I do like your attitude( well...dis referz to da oder articles :P)...though I don't appreciate romanticism, I do appreciate da oder aspects regarding which yaw've written yer articles...well regardin' da last article....da poem....an awesome piece...it feels like "it's happening to me".... :P woteva...sorry for pokin' mah nose...if yer intrstd... pleez check dis one out... www.bloodshredder.blogspot.com
-mephistopheles

wide-eyed-vagabond. said...

@ mephistopheles...
ur welcome,2 poke ur nose and pass comments....
i'll b glad 2 accept,eh!

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Unknown said...

ur poems r really gud....at least tui puropuri pagli nosh....no,really....didnt noe u wryt so wel....
Well, u always keep suprising us...poem club e sbmit krbi kintu........